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amepoesie Member
since 2006-01-19
Posts 63Canada |
You and I You and I, we have greeted so many! We are not evil; we want liberty. We are angels in disguise. We follow Your souls and their great, immortal flambeau. We know who you are; we love you. That’s all. We’ve lived and wept with you. Eternity Is our song. Don’t fret! Heaven is friendly. We will help you when it is time to go, You and I. Though your body will decay, we’ll still see The real you, what some call flaw, fallacy. Like the universe and its endless flow, You will be given Life and Death to grow, And we will for ever see your glory. You and I. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ame~ WELCOME to Passions In Poetry~ I am certainly looking forward to more from you~ This is a lovely offering ... welcome~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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amepoesie Member
since 2006-01-19
Posts 63Canada |
Thank you very much! I have plenty in store, for sure, but I won't swamp the forum yet lol. Ame et Poésie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I visited your website ... I can already see that we are in for a treat~ There are many talented writers here ... you'll be in good company~ Read to your heart's content ... and once again I welcome you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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amepoesie Member
since 2006-01-19
Posts 63Canada |
that's so nice of you!!!!! I still have to try different forms of poetry though, like haikus, that should be fun... Take care. Ame et Poésie |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY AME!!! What a beautiful entrance you have gifted us with. I look forward to reading more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter, |
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amepoesie Member
since 2006-01-19
Posts 63Canada |
Thank you Nancy! What a good community for poets it is! It is the first time people answer so quickly and positively! Take care. Ame et Poésie |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Welcome! There is a host of talent here and it's so nice to welcome one more into the family of blue pages. I like the perspective from which you wrote this. Rae |
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amepoesie Member
since 2006-01-19
Posts 63Canada |
Thanks a lot!!! In fact, that was a rewrite from a previous version, which was in old english, but pretty bad... So I am quite content with what I did, that's true! Take care. Ame et Poésie |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Now that was art. I loved that poem. I hope you like it here. I'm new and I love to learn and respond. Enjoy.. Hugs Kim |
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amepoesie Member
since 2006-01-19
Posts 63Canada |
Thanks a lot! |
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Musicmaker1969
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
First of all, WELCOME!!!! Great poem. I love the fact that somebody is writing about dying in a way that we are not alone on that journey. It reminded me of Touched By An Angel, where Andrew, the Angel of Death, walks with the dying person into Heaven. It is nice to know that we won't have to walk there alone, that it will be "You and I." Sheri Adams Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!! |
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amepoesie Member
since 2006-01-19
Posts 63Canada |
Thanks a lot for this very nice comment! Well you see, my poem is either understood or not at all. There are those who say that it is too much tell and not enough show, and others that it doesn't scan well at all. You cannot please everybody, as they say. But it is nice to see people who read poetry for the beauty of it. I am not implying that my poem is the most wonderful you'll ever read. It is just great to be recognised not for the way you scan your poem, but for the message in itself. By the way, this poem will be published in an online magazine called Underground Window next month. I'll give you the link as soon as they send me the issue. Thanks again! Cendrine Marrouat |
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