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janmew
Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 134
Canada

0 posted 2003-01-02 02:39 AM

Brightly
shining
through
each day
Though winds may howl and
storms may come our way,
behind each cloud there shines
a light to
lead us on
our way.
And so in
times that
darkness
seems to
reign not
night but
also day,
remember
that this,
and every day
brightly shines the Son

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

1 posted 2003-01-02 03:06 AM

I love your poem made into a picture. Very nice. The use of the word Son is nice here too and gives the rest of the poem a deeper meaning. He is the Light that guides our way through each and every storm. Amen. Thank you for sharing your poetry and the cross here with us.

-Bob

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2003-01-02 03:25 PM

How very true is this and very nice. Joyce

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

3 posted 2003-01-02 03:58 PM

I like your poem become a picture of cross. And I like the poem too

Cheers!

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

janmew
Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 134
Canada

4 posted 2003-01-03 09:12 AM

Bob, thank you for your comments on this one. I'm so glad you enjoyed this.

Joyce, Aries, thank you both. I'm glad you liked the way this turned out.

Jan

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

5 posted 2003-01-03 02:48 PM

Very clever, in a thousand years I would never have thought of typing 'a picture'. The whole read was very well done indeed.

Truths, Lies and Imagination,
The way my life has been
The person that I truly am,
Is very rarely seen. ©das

janmew
Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 134
Canada

6 posted 2003-01-03 10:09 PM

Thanks Spirit. I've done a few different word pictures. They are quite fun to do! Glad you enjoyed!

Jan

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-01-05 03:25 PM

(smiles) Oh Jan, this is lovely, sweet friend, I just love the shape as all your gorgeous words shine with a beacon of light! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

janmew
Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 134
Canada

8 posted 2003-01-07 04:08 PM

Thanks so much for your reply, Noah.

Jan

[This message has been edited by janmew (01-07-2003 04:09 PM).]

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