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You Are My All
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You Are My All |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States 
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You Are My All By Paul Wilson You are the beam… of my balance that measures left from right The apex of pendulum’s swing as I rise to new height You are the foundation that will not crumble The cross I could not bare carried by you… ever so humble You are the seed of life my soul the pod Your word will nourish me forever…you are thy God Storms shall come and go causing me too sway now and then With your strength dear God the battle I will win Together we will face satin and the fires of hell The victory will be ours in Heaven with you I will dwell I call the names of the twelve whom you choose to spread your word Help me be strong and true holy one’s I know my prayers will be heard ~ ~ ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Indeed Paul, and this beautiful prayer will surely be heard. Nice to read you in here. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Mysteria...So glad you liked this poem and it feels real good too be here in Spiritual sharing my faith in God with others. Thank you for your tender reply...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
So glad to have you here, Paul and this prayer is beautiful. Love, Joyce |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Joyce...Thank you so much for taking time too read and for your sweet reply. Glad too be here in Spiritual once again. Pardon the misspelled words...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paul~ 'You are the beam… of my balance' Oh ... how much I like thinking of Him as you've written~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Brian James Member
since 2005-06-26
Posts 147Winnipeg |
Especially the way in which you close this poem, there is a strong sense of faith about this entire piece... how in each stanza you identify three aspects of God, and how you come together by saying that you are certain that your prayers will be heard (almost as if you are celebrating the abundant evidence of this, and coming gloriously to your anticipated conclusion). I wonder, in the first three stanzas, I noticed you are discussing three divine aspects of the "beam" (builder, creator), the "cross" (the redeemer), and the "seed" (the spirit). Did you use the trinity as your point of reference, here? Because if you did, it comes across beautifully. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for the opportunity. Brian |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marge...Thanks you so much for your tender reply and for understanding...Paul Sorry for the late reply due to a bad hurricane as we all know as Katrina. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Brian...I never had any forethought about the three devine aspects you mentioned, but now that you have enlightened me I can see your thinking. Glad you opened my eyes and thanks so very much for reading and for you reply. I just wrote this from my heart and with the words given to me my the creator. Thanks again...Paul Sorry for the late reply, due too hurricane Katrina this is the first time I've had any computer time. |
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scentsofhope Junior Member
since 2006-03-01
Posts 27Oklahoma, USA |
Loved your poem! Very powerful....full of strength....and yes we will win our place with GOD. One day we will be with HIM...what a glorious day too! I liked how you expressed your thoughts. Very uplifting for me on this day! scentsofhope |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
scentsofhope...Thanks so much for reviving this old poem and giving it life as God gives us life everyday...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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