Spiritual Journeys #2 |
When All I've Loved |
Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
When All I've Loved When all whom I have loved are gone, Dear Lord, when I'm the only one Who cares if I should live or die, When there is no one left to cry; Then Lord, take me. But if there is a single soul For whom I play important role, Who might just stumble, lose his way Without my guidance through the day, Then I would be Content to stay another while To give him courage, bring a smile; Teach him to look to You above, For truest guidance, purest love, His way to see. Then I would say, "My work is done. On Earth there is no other one Who needs the love I have to give. No reason now for me to live." Dear Lord, take me. By: Joyce 7/23, 05 [This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (07-23-2005 06:56 PM).] |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
What a selfless request in His servanthood! You've been a constant inspiration on these pages for any who read your work and I'm one who's been carried through a crisis by it. Bless you and thank you, Rae |
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merlynh Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 411deer park, wa |
It is wise to consider those whom the Lord has put into our care for they are the inheritance that is past along the vine watchful to receive his grace. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Thank you Sandgrain. If I have been any comfort to you I am happy. Love, joyce |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Thanks for reading Merlynh. Love, Joyce |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
What a wonderful write from such a precious soul Tima |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Joyce, I like the inner conflict expressed here between "Lord, send me!" and/or "Lord, take me home!" and I do agree with you with mutual hope and faith as long as we remain here, as you've expressed, that God would give us a most challenging work to do and a most creative and inspiring word to share. Thank you for sharing your heart here my Christian friend and God bless you. -Bob |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
WOW, Joyce, it is like you had been reading my mind...this was awesome...and a keeper!! Thank you for this, dear friend!! God bless ~ Becka |
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Brian James Member
since 2005-06-26
Posts 147Winnipeg |
This is a beautiful prayer. Desire for God is a wonderful thing, but understanding the purpose of life on earth can help us to love God even more. On a formal note, I love your choice of stanza structure here, with the imperative conclusion of the stanza coming in a metrically brief compared to the quick pace of previous lines. It drops off into a kind of pause, a contemplation, and a sense of certainty. It really brings the poetry to life. Take care. Brian |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Dear Joyce, My Friend-- You've been a source of comfort Of Faith and Hope and Love-- Your work here is not finished Or else you'd be above. Thank God for such like You Who of self freely give, To die is Gain for you But Christ, so long as you live! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ What a lovely poem and sentiment Of a devoted life of service Which you have in so many ways backed up by your actions. Thanks also for the great encouragement & blessing that you have been to me! God Bless You-Either Way- LOVE, David Every Day's a Blessing And Gift-Wrapped from Above, Share it with another And Spread the Father's Love!!! May You come to Know His Best Blessing |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joyce~ Don't know how I missed this ... but am thankful for it being bumped~ You are a beautiful person~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Joyce...Tender touching write.Enjoyed..Paul The end of never we will not see For thru God we will live for all eternity ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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