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drummerboy678
Member

since 2003-10-28

Posts 134

0 posted 2005-04-01 02:25 AM

in my coffin,
I would like to
have two things
there with me;
one, I would like
a light,
because darkness
is depressing
(like death).
and two,
I would
like a bible, so
I can lie there quietly
and read about how it
should have been
if books
like that
were true.

dont be offended...

[This message has been edited by drummerboy678 (04-02-2005 07:01 PM).]

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2005-04-01 06:18 PM

Sounds reasonable to me...

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

2 posted 2005-05-07 12:38 PM

I think this is a beautiful little poem.

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

3 posted 2006-07-20 11:41 PM

hmm now you seem to have had my attitude that day

Hollow heroes seperate as they run...Shadows linger in your pain dead and done

the quell
Member

since 2006-07-19

Posts 144
Liverpool, UK

4 posted 2006-07-23 05:00 PM

Very clever and unique! And quite unexpected too. I really enjoyed this

Where black, bleeding roses await the Thirteen,
I see not the stars, but the darkness between

Venus1974
Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 79
Tennessee, USA

5 posted 2006-07-29 12:45 PM

Intresting thanx for sharing

Peace and happiness to us all, Venus

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

6 posted 2006-07-29 12:50 PM

Drummerboy,

A nice meditation. I agree and too believe that if the world were to live as is prescribed by the Bible what a most perfect life it would be.

Thank you for sharing and God bless.

-Bob

David D Jerald
Member

since 2006-08-07

Posts 74
Tucson, Arizona

7 posted 2006-08-07 05:57 PM

Dear Drummer Boy,
Do not worry about offending anyone If you have the courage to write your truth on relgion.
There are many holy books, hunt them down and read them all. Start with "The Tao Te Ching" look it up on the internet. Read it.
Good luck .. your poem was a brave poem.
Dave

jenny
Junior Member

since 2006-03-30

Posts 45

8 posted 2006-08-09 11:07 PM

To the drummer boy, i liked reading your poem as it is exactly how my partner feels.

Because of things in his past he finds it hard to believe in the lord or the bible, even though he has read it from cover to cover.

No one would take offence with your honesty.

I commend you.

all the best jen

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

9 posted 2006-08-11 08:25 PM

I really like this poem, and i have to agree with one of the ppl that wrote above me you seem to have a lill attitude in this poem. Which is good, I hope to see more from you.

~If i speak of love and it wishes as I sqeeze my eues shut, does your heart also break?~

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

10 posted 2006-08-15 10:58 PM

I am a Christian and I loved your poem. You had somthing to say, you said it. Bravo for that.

Hugs Kimberly

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