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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-10-28 07:45 PM

October Sky Attitude

you move in like
enthusiastic warm October storm
restlessly floating my sheets
and stirring my morn
gently pour yourself
flow deep into seams
rain now and settle
on the dust of my dreams
lightening strikes
then before me you are there
I smell you low, thick
and heavy in the air
I go rolling through
fall’s unmistakable thunder
drenching the turbulence
tearing it asunder
leave me your signature
ghost of my altitude attitude
warmest center calmed
by paralleled latitude
days may be shorter but we dance
showered in October sky
wash over me
nothing to you I can deny

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-10-28 07:49 PM

WOW!! Fantastic Helen!
Just like an October storm...raging.
Love this and I'm keeping it!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

2 posted 2002-10-28 07:51 PM

Fantastic indeed. But I was unsure of what is about. At first I thought it was a love poem, but I am still unsure.But you need not tell me, it's more fun to figure it out on your own....

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2002-10-28 08:02 PM

helen - I can't say this is one of your best, because they are all best. What I can say is that this is very beautiful from your heart, which you write with always...

BC

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

4 posted 2002-10-28 09:05 PM

I liked this, the atmosphere evokes your October sky.

Ed

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2002-10-29 01:02 AM

very well expressed! I love storms and Octobers

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2002-10-29 02:17 AM

Helen, you wrote beautiful words on this subject, as you do in all your poetry. Thanks for sharing.

Love To All,
Ethel

Amature2
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 416

7 posted 2002-10-29 11:26 PM

Another excellent poem 1slick_lady. You sure know how to put an ending to your poems.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-10-29 11:28 PM

(sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is so gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, your wonderful words always conjure such peaceful storms of emotions, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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