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Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

0 posted 2002-10-28 12:12 PM

"i stayed in one
and there was this little stream
and trees all around
and when i woke up the next morning
there was the most beautiful snow
falling so gently
and it was so quiet
except for the sound
of the stream
and with the sun
coming over the top of the mountain
it was like being close to heaven."

etoodog

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

1 posted 2002-10-28 12:35 PM

Robert...I loved this brief; but beautiful poem. I could feel the chill of the snow falling, the whiteness covering the trees and bushes; and you seeing Heaven in its beauty. ***Ivy Rose

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

2 posted 2002-10-28 12:50 PM

Reminds me of Hemmingways writing.Simple yet elegant.

paladin

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

3 posted 2002-10-28 03:06 PM

I enjoyed this very much. It felt serene and oh so peaceful. Although, I must admit, winter is not my favorite season.

Nice job of writing, Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-10-28 03:19 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, spring is my favorite season but I love the snow too and it feels so dreamy and magical just looking outside! (big hugggsssss) You always bring glitter to your words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2002-10-28 04:29 PM

Robert

I appreciate the way you see
in this lovely poem.

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

6 posted 2002-10-28 06:16 PM

Robert, this was so gentle. A lovely read.
A simple beauty brought to us through your eyes and the whisper of your muse.

Thank you

SimplyGold

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2002-10-28 06:35 PM

Robert, this made me have such a peaceful and warm feeling. Thanks for sharing.

Love To all,
Ethel

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

8 posted 2002-10-28 07:57 PM

Hello Robert

Thank you for painting such a lovely picture from your palette of words.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2002-10-29 04:21 AM

Like this...James

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