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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2002-10-27 04:29 PM


Brian Beaudry's poem about his daughter Angie that lived only 3 days. He titled it "God Doesn't Waste Miracles" and you may read it at < www.voy.com/7622/ >

Changed

right there
in the middle of elation
full of caffeinated vibrations
and the essence of
the best breakfast
in weeks

savoring the flavor
of life
and the joy of living it
smiling inside at the beauty
of joy
and vigor

I read his poem
his poem
of ultimate love
his poem
of ultimate loss
and his faith
in the miracle not wasted

she lived
embodying perfect love
but three days
yet
perfect spirit
eternally
upon his heart
under his skin
profoundly a part of him

I witnessed
his love
his faith
and became subdued,
filled with tears
transformed to a puddle
of sorrow
at his pain
and in awe
of his witness

©October 27, 2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2002 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2002-10-27 04:55 PM


Brian is a good man...and this loss
saddens me as well..  Thank you for the
sharing and for this beautiful poem...

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2002-10-27 05:14 PM


Your sensitivity and caring is reflected in this moving piece of writing.

EA

garysgirl
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3 posted 2002-10-27 09:39 PM


Virginia, this is a very sweet, caring and compassionate poem. Thanks for sharing.


Love To All,
Ethel

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-10-27 10:19 PM




(big hugggsssssss) This is sooooooo wonderfully compassionate, sweet friend, my heart too goes out to the loss but know we all offer angel hugs to those who experience these feelings! (sigh) I know Mutington's Meadow myself, I used to post there all the time and may consider a comeback soon, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
5 posted 2002-10-27 11:21 PM


Beautifully written, indeed, Virginia...
with loving sensitivity...
~ angel hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2002-11-05 04:09 AM


had to boot this one back up
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