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courage to fly |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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Courage To Fly I want to curl up into you Let you hold me, hide me Until the world gives up On finding me I want to close my eyes And go to sleep Frozen in a tranquil bliss Secure in your embrace I want to crawl in beneath The breath you inhale And let your peace Exhale over me Will you envelop me Until the demons flee from me Will you rock me In the warmth of your understanding another day... I will take courage to fly... -dgvarner 10/23/02 "dont cry because its over, smile because it happened...!" -unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
dgvarner Well done I enjoyed the read. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I enjoyed this greatly; how nice to have a 'friend' and a 'lover' all in one. I can relate to the wanting to be protected and hugged and held...so real. Thank you, I think this is well done. Warmly, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Excellent! WEll written and a perfectly timed ending Loved this! Liz |
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Pezz1 Junior Member
since 2002-10-27
Posts 33Scotland |
I liked this alot having someone to share fears and encourage one is important. You capture that in this piece |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
dgvarner - this is very romantic, warm, and loving... BC |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
dgvarner, being the hopeless romantic that I know I am, I absolutely loved the thoughts your poem made me feel. I guess because I could feel the truth in the words you wrote. I enjoyed it very much. I haven't seen much of you around here in this month I've been here. I'd love to read more of your work. Thanks for sharing this one. Love To All, Ethel...garysgirl [This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-27-2002 11:54 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is wonderfully sentimental, sweet friend, yes, love is always worth something flying for so let the courage fill your heart! This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
I have been feeling as you say "another day... I will take courage to fly... Thank you much. etoodog |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Will you rock me in the warmth of your understanding?" This passage has so many connotations. I know where you're coming from with this write----and I have felt the same way--in fact, I feel that way right this minute! tehe You express your emotions so well. So many readers, I am sure, identify with what your poems convey. EA |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dg~ It's been too long since I've read you "I want to crawl in beneath The breath you inhale And let your peace Exhale over me" I love this part. so beautiful, and content |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
SEYMOUR, PAT, LIZ, PEZZ1, BC, ETHEL, NOAH, ROBERT, EARTHANGEL, SEA..glad you enjoyed!! thank you so much for your comments--i really enjoy hearing from you!  hugs! g "dont cry because its over, smile because it happened...!" -unknown |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love this! *S* I've read it several times... enjoying more with each read. *S* |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
SOUTHERN! thank you..glad you like it enough to read it several times..!! lol hugs, g "dont cry because its over, smile because it happened...!" -unknown |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
And i know when that day comes you will fly high. enjoyed Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Gale~ Always, I 'feel' what you write...you know that. But today...this is perfect. Love and hugs, friend...I miss you. ~Me "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Love this! Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller |
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