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~K
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 104

0 posted 2002-10-27 08:11 AM

Fate is bound by
the the conniving
thread of ignorance.
The bitter martyr
chokes on her halo.
Acid tongue reflex
detracts from the
nobility of sacrifice.
What saint denies her
place among the angels?

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-10-27 12:34 PM

Wow, this is excellent, sweet friend, this is so short but poignant, sadly there are many angels here who just are bashful in revealing their wings and others who wear those feathers in disguise! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet K, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-27-2002 12:34 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-10-27 03:45 PM

Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-10-27 05:05 PM

You have a very interesting way of using words. I usually read your poetry twice to try and grasp the essence of your poem. This was very well done.

EA

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2002-10-27 05:36 PM

Quite to the point and very interesting, but, I would say "ALL" the glory should go to God. Some angels and saints just don't know how to act, maybe cause they are simply still too human.....

A lot to ponder here, and I certainly like a poem which causes me to think!

This is very thought provoking.
And, well written.

Thanks for making me think.

Warmly,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

~K
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 104

5 posted 2002-10-29 03:45 AM

Thank you so much for taking the time to read & figure out my madness! I will be looking out for all of your poems!

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