Open Poetry #23 |
The Three Men of Passions (you know who) |
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
They're in constant competition, these three poeteers, Toe, the lover, LngJhn - the knight and the ever-romantic Deer. It's all in good jest, this silly old time ribbin', it's all about which one is the best in courtin' other wimmen! They attack masculinity, sanity and sobriety, but they love each other - that's the reality. So go on with ya', shake hands and come out fighting, we know the real deal and we find it quite delighting! Corinne (with apoligies to wives, girlfriends, etc) |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like this poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles in delight) Oh yes, now fuss up, young men, admit it and you just are too embarrassed or stubbornn to say it, you really like each other! LOL! Like that ever will happen! LOL! (kiss on cheek) This is delightful, sweet friend, I love it, all three of these wonderful men are such delight friends to us all just as you are, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Delightful Corinne. Enjoyed it much. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Corrine, this is a really good poem about our three clowns around here. I enjoyed it. Thanks. Love to All, Ethel |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Seems to me we've got some others, really, like a band of brothers Larry C, and Kevin, have tried but to our chagrin, they simply cried... Duncan, too, he's tried his best, he's put his pen there to the test but 'Deer, Long John, Toe, well, they simply put the rest away. Although it's fun to see them jest... the Scallwags Three are just the best. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Cor...knowing these three... It will take more than just apologies to the women that they have dropped like hot potatoes over the years....wives, girlfriends, etc.... Cute...like this....a chuckler... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne A delightful write, enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ya gotta love'm eh Cor? Cute write and much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
INDEED What would Passions be Without the scoundrels three? |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Corinne~ I certainly wouldn't be the same without them. I enjoyed this. Hugs, ~Vicky Nan...dare I say...it would be...boring. "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Their shenanigans would be fun to watch no matter what... but knowing the admiration and respect they have for each other (and conceal so very well! LOL) makes the antics all the more delightful. *S* Thanks for this salute to a wonderful trio... every smile they share is greatly appreciated. *S* And congratulations on your 4000th post! *S* [This message has been edited by suthern (10-28-2002 07:09 AM).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Okay, so I've got a guilty conscience, Which I guess shocks most of you, Most think that I don't have one, But yep, I really do. Being serious, (which is not my better stuff, And taking into consideration, my other stuff is bad enough), But I'd like to take this moment To make something perfectly clear, I've nothing but the highest regards, For LongJohn and Balladeer. I doubt that there are many, Folks with such expertise, In fact I don't know any, They're talented 'S.O.B'S As you know I love to tease, And they're such desirable targets I guess because I know that they Will respond to me the "hardest" So let it be known to all of you That this is the only reason, Cuz truly I think they're the best, And I love "Toe-Raggin" and a'teasin them. (THE PRECEDING IS A PAID ADVERTISEMENT FROM BALLADEER'S PEST CONTROL INC AND LONG JOHN SILVER CLEANER) |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
And, very sweet write from a very sweet gal, and to all the nice replies to her poem.. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
That Toerag is a rascal. He's a saddle burr, for sure And LongJohn's words are sometimes more Than humans can endure. They've no respect for Mr. 'Deer, Their actions are unkind. They come out with the cruelest things That tiptoe through their minds. I've taken Prozac for the grief These two have made me feel And lost sleep over unkind words That painted me a heel. Please tell these two to let me be If they don't stop I won't. Please tell them 'deer has had enough.. On second thought.....PLEASE DON'T!!! Thanks for the poem, Corrine! Those two are real stinkers but I'm trying hard to keep decorum in the forums by keeping them in line....it's a full-time job! Thank God for both of them!! |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Excellent write about our jesters three Corinne!! Aren't they just the cutest "little rascals"??!! Tammy |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
and in this write the Muskatels ride again. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Corinne, when I first came to passions, I thought they were all really fighting. It even upset me for awhile. I was sure glad to here that that were just teasing each other. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Hey guys! Glad you liked! It's always a pleasure to read of your "battles!" Hugs and kisses, Cor |
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