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Like rasberry rain (For garysgirl)
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Like rasberry rain (For garysgirl) |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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The summer, With its heat and its love And the rain Like the moon up above So magical, like rasberry rain That bittersweet taste Can get rid of the pain And when things look so down I sit and wait For rasberry rain Isn't life Just the sweetest thing It can make you so sad Or make you want to sing So magical like rasberry rain That bittersweet taste Can get rid of the pain And when things look so down I sit and wait For rasberry rain Just a flitting glimpse Of the birds as they fly And you just can't remember That things have to die but when you do, You envy their wings That can take them away From the ground So Magical like rasberry rain That bittersweet taste Can get rid of the pain And when things look so down I sit and wait For rasberry rain Yeah, for rasberry rain [This message has been edited by Wind (10-26-2002 08:14 PM).] |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Ok, obviously the title didn't catch anyone'sattention, but I wanted for Ethel to see this because this is the poem that she enspired. Oh well. Beter undiscovered than not at all |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Wind - it just caught my eye it did. I liked what I read, rasberry rain, great thoughts... BC |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey, Sweet Wind....I saw it earlier before I had to leave, but I couldn't post a reply right then. I'M SOOOO SORRY!!!! I really love this poem. It makes me feel like singing. It makes me happy, too, that you got the inspiration for the poem from my poem. Hey!! Is it okay for me to send a copy of your poem to Gary? He will love it, too. Thanks again for sharing your poetry with us. It's very good. Love To All, Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Liz, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love the title and the poem shines with beautiful surreality that drew me in and had me imagining pink and red skies dripping like honey and tasting sweet! (kiss on cheek) I can tell Ethel really loves this just as I do, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Of corse Ethel, I'd be honored if you gave it to gary. I have no problem whatsoever. You know, I did make this into a song, and am trying to find a way to put it onto my computer. I'll tell you when i do. And Thanks noah, I love your description of the sky dripping with honey. And thank you everyone else. This poem means a lot to me. Thank you ethel, thanks so much for enspireing me [This message has been edited by Wind (10-26-2002 09:39 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is lovely...much enjoyed! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks a lot, Wind. I know that Gary will love it. Thanks, again. Love, Ethel |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
I just the love "rasberry rain" this is a lovely poem.I'm pushing to the top so others can experience its magic. SimplyGold |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
To the top again, Wind... This poem has a magical feel to it... and I'm so glad that Ethel liked it too!  ~ hugs and grinsLyra |
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