Open Poetry #23 |
All For Not |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
For not these aches, so many never known escapes By far the farthest star, to reach in sharper shapes Curves in happy harmony bend in shadow drapes To take these revelations and prize them all to you To be the brightest light in me of love so very true For not each consequence, each breaking down of fence By far the best you are, to charm my heart of innocence Arches bold the love I hold to shine in graceful eminence To take these dreams cascade and treasure oh so true To be the shimmer found in me and glimmer all of you For not these days without, uncertain doubt far now escapes By far the future star, in mystic fire and breathless shapes Curves in play beneath you stay wherever moonlight drapes To take these tears of passing years and prize them all to you To be the brightest light in me…of love so very true Copyright Kkh 10/25/02 |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Yes, I love this poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh I loved this, when you come back - does this style have a name? This was simply excellent. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
TD...so apt, so true, so beautiful! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Kathleen...how I do love your unique style of writing. Much enjoyed this beauty! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
To take these dreams cascade and treasure oh so true To be the shimmer found in me and glimmer all of you beautiful lines, K M |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) And may that futire star descend and light for you true loves inevitable sign, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, I love the romance of this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-25-2002 09:43 PM).] |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Bravo!!!! Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, this is absolutely beautiful. I love the way you write. Love To All, Ethel |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I can only type softly: This is an absolutely exquisite poem of love. Thank you so very much for sharing it with us. It is a joy to read! Warmly, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I wish it had been longer. This was great! The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You sparkle sooooo nice Diamond Lady~ I never wanted this to end! |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Beautiful beyond words!!! So intricately penned..with many nuances and pearls of swirling passion. ***Ivy Rose |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful! I love this story, thanks for sharing. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - very nice. It must be a good feeling to have someone write about another close... BC |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
"To be the brightest light in me…of love so very true" How you are able to recognize these diamonds in your writings are beyound me. I am happy to read some of them. Thank you. etoodog |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Beautiful.. SimplyGold |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You all grace me with such uplifting support, and I humbly thank you all. ThisDiamond |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
To take these tears of passing years and prize them all to you To be the brightest light in me…of love so very true This is so beautiful, Kathy, although it speaks of deep heartbreak ~ loving chipmunk hugs Lyra |
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