Open Poetry #23 |
.......on the brink.....(a repost) |
Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I was teetering on the brink of forgetfulness Until you swept me off my feet and I was kidnapped by love's recall. Chris Barker 2001 ~~~~~~~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou loner. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
A ransom that one would not mind being paid. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Chris...you know, you say so much in just a few words. I really love this. Take care and stay warm on this gloomy, cold Friday. ~Missing you hugs, Teed~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, I know what you mean! Chris, I don't know if I mentioned this to you before, but you look adorable in your photo! Linda |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How sweet this is... a tender reminder... that all is as it should be! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Chris, this is so beautiful. I love the way ya'll can put so much into so few words. Maybe I'll learn how one day. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
M.Romeo - thankyou for offering up a ransom..lol. NancyLee - yes, I have my woollies on to-day...do you? Brrrr!! Thankyou dear sister for your reply. Linda - thankyou once again for the compliment. If you could see the whole picture, you would know why I look so happy. I am holding my second grandson, Andrew, born this past July. Karilea - yes, love can make things "all better" and as they "should be." Thankyou. Ethel - thankyou for you kind comments. [This message has been edited by Nightshade (10-25-2002 04:06 PM).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Alot of feeling in few words.....nice write....btw...love your photo...you're a cutie!!! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Why Toerag....I'm blushing Thankyou for the comments and compliment. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Awwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is beautiful, and may love always hold you hostage in your heavens where all your dreams come true, yay! (kiss on cheek) I just love your new picture and beautiful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Dear Noah, thankyou so much for reading and commenting as you always do. hugs, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
ohhhhh...I really like this one, Chris. So glad you reposted it. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Michael - thankyou dear poet!! Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Chris, I didn't know that was a brink! I had no idea I had been so close to danger so many times. Lovely write. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Larry - lol. thanks for liking this and commenting. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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