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Open Poetry #23

Thank You....(20 or less)

amigo
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 520
the earth school

0 posted 2002-10-25 01:12 PM

windblown leaves
flickering lamp
spreading dark shadows

life still draws strength
to fight death

your love ~ A Guiding Light ~

[This message has been edited by amigo (10-25-2002 01:46 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-25 01:25 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

2 posted 2002-10-25 05:07 PM

This is great amigo!

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

3 posted 2002-10-25 05:37 PM

Nice poem.
I like the birds fluttering around like that! Wish I knew how to do that with my poems!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-10-25 08:35 PM

(sigh) This is just wonderful, sweet friend, your words always draw strength to all our hearts, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amigo, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2002-10-25 08:39 PM

I find this deep and meaningful in so few words. And, that is the best kind of love to have.

Thank You,

Warmly,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2002-10-25 11:15 PM

This is a very good write and in such few words. I liked it. thanks for sharing.
Love to All,
Ethel

amigo
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 520
the earth school

7 posted 2002-10-26 04:04 PM

Julie ~ thank you, dear

Munda ~ thank you, glad you like it...my muse had/has been asleep for quite a while now...

Radrook ~ thank you...yeah, the flying birds i like it too...that's very simple...just click on the second icon (edit/delete message) on my post and there...it shows the way it is done...if you've ?? (i'm sure you'll have none)...email me...

Noah ~ thank you dear, you've such a warm heart & words for all...

Pat ~ thank you...yes, the words do have depth and special meaning for me...glad you felt it too....

Ethel ~ thank you...

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