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Secret Whisper
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since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

0 posted 2002-10-25 02:33 AM

Ebony Sky

The ebony night sky
Rains down frozen dreams
That break upon the ground.
How quickly they have fallen from grace.

"See, no one loves..." - Prayers for Rain

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-10-25 05:32 AM

love the echo of thunder in this.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-10-25 12:45 PM

I foresee a rain storm.

Good write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

3 posted 2002-10-25 05:22 PM

Very clever writing! Great poem.

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

4 posted 2002-10-25 05:38 PM

Impressive imagery!

Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

5 posted 2002-10-25 08:24 PM

A very nice touch, I could face the rain. Thank you.

etoodog

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-10-25 09:50 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Alice, this is so well-said, sweet friend, this is an aching vision to see ones dreams faklling apart but I wish all who experience this strength that the best dreams will become true inevitably! (sigh) This is well-said, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alice, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2002-10-25 09:52 PM

Wanted to catch these broken dreams...heartfelt in their destiny...
Wonderful articulation. ThisDiamond

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2002-10-25 11:11 PM

Alice, this a lot said in a few words. I enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.
Love to All,
Ethel

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

9 posted 2002-10-26 01:45 AM

This poem is a rare gem...so very much said with so few words. This is WONDERFUL!!!
***Ivy Rose

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2002-10-27 10:29 AM

enjoyed

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

11 posted 2002-10-27 10:39 AM

I enjoyed this poem a great deal.
So much said, in so few words.

Thanks,
Warmly,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

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