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scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

0 posted 2002-10-12 11:10 PM

CANDY APPLE RED

Apple glazed in bright red,
a gift of love presented to her,
satisfying a sweet craving.

...believe what your heart feels.....

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2002-10-12 11:15 PM

scorpio - a sweet apple would do it...

BC

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-10-12 11:19 PM

Mmmm Scorpio..how did you know I love candy apples?

Just a guess or....something else?
I love this...and I'm keeping it!!

~Hugs YOU!~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

3 posted 2002-10-12 11:22 PM

You may be right Bill...Enchantress took a bite...*S*

...believe what your heart feels.....

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-10-12 11:34 PM

That wasn't me...that was my sister Nightshade!!!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-10-13 12:26 PM

sweet ruby apple
glazed in porcelain sugar
poisoned with heaven

Yay!!! Awwwwwww, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love this, your words are always as weet as candy and candy-coated with a soft center, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2002-10-13 02:38 AM

They say that the best way to a man's heart is through his tummy. Well it works quite well with we women as well! Chocolates are great---but a candy apple?!?---Now you're talking!

EA

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2002-10-13 01:23 PM

Scorpio, I have a feeling you would enjoy working on Haikus, Senryus and Tankas...

Red ruby apples
candied in delightfulness
tempting with its sweet

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

8 posted 2002-10-13 01:32 PM

That's awsome, you're makeing me want an apple now!

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

9 posted 2002-10-13 01:41 PM

Thank you all for reading this...and your warm comments and encouragements...yes Sunshine, I will look into the haikus, senryus and tankas...again thank you

...believe what your heart feels.....

[This message has been edited by scorpio (10-13-2002 02:11 PM).]

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

10 posted 2002-10-14 01:46 PM

scorpio - just cause she is my big sister...Enchantress always blames everything on me!! I did not take a bite.....well...maybe just a nibble....but that's all!!

Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2002-10-14 01:54 PM

Scorpio, I enjoyed the taste of this "sweet apple" very much. It sounds like the others did, too. thanks for sharing this sweet apple of a poem.

With Love To All,
Ethel

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

12 posted 2002-10-14 03:04 PM

Very beautiful and well-crafted Haiku/Senryu.
***Ivy Rose

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