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What's in the bag?
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What's in the bag? |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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"I have a surprise for you" An ordinary bag Brown and slightly ripped Made of the same stuff as cheap paper towels in public bathrooms "Oh, thanks." Not much expression And the giver's eyes start to swell will tears And they realize that they choose the wrong person to give this gift to "What's in the bag?" Something I wanted to show you But I changed my mind But maybe I'll give it to you when you are ready to apreciate it. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Wonderfully written. i really enjoyed the read. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Wind, there is so much truth found in these words. It could have so many different meanings...makes a person ponder their thoughts. You wrote it very well. thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Sounds like my ex wife. Whenever I gave her flowers all hell broke loose! Thanks for sharing! Enjoyed! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Liz, this is so well-written, sweet friend, I know this feeling and it really is depressing when we should rather be thankful for the more simpler displays of generosity we share! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I had a cop ask me this once....it didn't go real well.....great write |
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