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A Watercolor (For Etoile)
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A Watercolor (For Etoile) |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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Textured stock Sketched, With bare tracings Of love, yet unrealized Awaiting the wash Of relevant colors Applied by these Unsteady hands In attempt to depict A romance in wash Your solitary Blues With my own lonely Ochres Strive to find balance And harmony within This unfinished painting A watercolor of us Je t'aime, Etoile Ed |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
I liked this. It made me smile.  I loved the references to art, and how you connected it with love. French is a nice touch too. Magnifique!  Kielo I don't care if you're an old fart, because old people are smarter than me. |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
A romance in wash... the visions of that one line alone leaves ripples... |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
a fine fine unfinished Ed... (and H)  b |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful.. so pleased to find you still here. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Ed....thank you...I adore this beautiful poem. Kisses Brush strokes softly linger over my body Effortless as wisps of shadows moving across the room Breathing lightly across my breasts Moonlight streams through the studio skylight Touching my face with an innocent, unintended longing Flickering almost imperceptibly Exaggerating the hunger hidden deep in my heart Our bodies sing intricate chorales of light Faceted bodies pulsing with passion Winding about each other in elaborate rays of celebration Delicately etched against the night’s sky Ocher and amber Saffron and citrine Passions transfigure into colors that never had a name Exquisite fragile elegant ethereal A portrait of our evening's embrace Amore... Heather |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Her "solitary blues" and your "lonely ochres", blended together, would make a wash of healing green that could bring the balance and harmony you strive for. ~ Perhaps you should finish the painting.... Linda |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wranx You paint with a brush made of finest feelings. A pleasure to read your art. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ed, I loved this poem. I could feel your heart in it. You are still painting, friend, with your elegant words of beauty. Thanks for sharing with us, friend. Love to All, Ethel |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Thanks to all, for your most kind comments. They are always appreciated Ed |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Etoile, there you go again, prettying up my poor scribbles with your beautiful verse. (of course, I love it when you do) It is yours to do with, as you please. My pleasure is in your reply. Je t'aime *Kisses* Ed [This message has been edited by wranx (10-25-2002 10:53 AM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Love the soft tints here. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wranx A delicate water indeed, enjoyed. |
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