Open Poetry #23 |
Asking Myself When |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Asking Myself When Went on the inside Looking out Smiling away Yet so full of doubt Gathering a thread Picking a word Upon deaf ears My torment unheard Suffering in silence Worrying again Confidence zero All becomes a strain A low self-esteem Creates despair Swallowing tears I’m painfully aware Completing a verse With poetic pen Esteem to grow Asking myself when ? Hope ©2002 |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Did you ever notice, that the best of treasures come from extreme pressures? Take heart my friend...you write well. ThisDiamond |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This was wonderfully penned. I loved everything about this poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
HopeS Beautiful verse, all in good time. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hope, I love the way you write. You have such a sharing heart. Thanks for sharing it with us. Lov To All, Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Hope, I can understand this feeling, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you as your poetry is always lovely and may every word increase the self-esteem in you and may nothing but smiles fill your days! (kiss on cheek) This is honestly touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Whoa! Well, this should raise self-esteem, if you are speaking of yourself. You versed what many of us think and feel. This is indeed, a great poem. Thank you for letting me know others feel as I do sometimes. Warmly, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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