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Zany Words |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Zany Words Zany is the words that spar Echoing from the near and far Searching for the daffodil Lilies now upon the hill Shorter are the nights for me Sailing on a diamond sea. Weaker are the winds that blow Fewer are the seeds I sew. Dimmer is the misty shore Nearly closed the Adams door Nearer is horizons view, for To my look there’s nothing new. I do not fish I have no bate The line is short I cannot wait And thus to zany words I laugh These words that seem an epitaph Alas my friends disparity Has filled my bags sagacity. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Stay awhile sir. Let us write the epitaph....many years from now. Enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Seymour, this is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, let the sagacity always rest there in your heart and amalgamate with the capillaries of youth that flow in you and provide the ever magical muse to all our hearts! (big hugggsssss) This is nwonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RSWells Thank you and I'll try. LOL Noah, Always enjoy your replies. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! Many many years from now... I shall still be taking my morning cup of tea with you.. and enjoying your every word ever so much. ~Morning hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Leave the fishing to the fools... forget golf ... way too many rules. You only need your poets pen ... rhymed reprise writes you young again. I dont wanna hear of sagacity ... it's a waste of your infinity. They say you are young as you feel ... if we believe, then the fountain of youth is real. You have to live life long to have truths to be told ... It's just a fact, you cant be this wise and not be old. ~~~  ~~~ Balladeer and Sy???  Randy fishing LOL [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (10-24-2002 08:59 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Goodmorning, dear Seymour. Thanks for another sweet, wise, delightful write this morning. I enjoyed very much. Love To All, Ethel |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Winkiewinkie   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Your imaging is a sight. Fishing with Mike seems right. And your response is a delight. WWRS Ethel, You are sweet, thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress Thank you and enjoy your response ever so much. Hugs |
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Blue Kitty Member
since 2002-08-05
Posts 72Virginia |
fun and whimsy but mostly a joy to read |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - another morning treasure! Thankyou for this excellent read. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Zany is as zany does in our do's and as ever was a bit of form less -ality a bit of special bite, reality... still many years to treasure, thus, that said, dear Sy, here's your buss  |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
I love this one...Great job!!!! Love these lines... "Shorter are the nights for me Sailing on a diamond sea. Weaker are the winds that blow Fewer are the seeds I sew. Dimmer is the misty shore Nearly closed the Adams door Nearer is horizons view, for To my look there’s nothing new." Enjoyed very much! DeaDiAmore |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I do not fish I have no bate Seymour, sweets... that's just the time to go fishing! *G* If you catch anything, you have to clean it... just lie back and enjoy the dragonfly races and cloud formations... and conceal the gleam in your eye as you sadly shake your head at the end of the day admitting you didn't get a single bite. *G* As always, a delight to read. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Blue Kitty Thank you for the joy of reply. Chris, THank you for t he excellent comment. Sunshine Thank you for t he poem and good wishes. DeaDiAmore, Thank you for the quote and enjoy. suthern You know I often do just that, but I think you knew. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
seymour darling heart there you go spinning another glorious delight that covers my mind with such a delight. I used to be one of the early birds now I’m one of the night owls, what does this say about me? Possibly I’m turning into a creature of the night. Oh spooky. Who needs bait to catch a fish? You have the charm for a fresher dish And when you dangle the hook like so All those poetic phrases simply flow Onto your line and you catch them to Oh what is a poetic phrase to do? There it was not minding its fate But you caught it without a hint of bait But all the best phrases long to be Used in Seymour’s perfect poetry So the choice they have is this To lie free or to dance in poet’s bliss These words you sprinkle in poet’s line Like all your phrases are super fine Truly another sparkling wonder how do you do it day after day, I utterly utterly love it  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'm ready to fish, Sy.....got the ball retreiver ready!!!  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Shorter are the nights for me Sailing on a diamond sea. Weaker are the winds that blow Fewer are the seeds I sew. Beautifully said, Sy... but I think you still sew many seeds of lovely poems  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha A delightful reply dear, thank you Balladeer That's true you don't need bait for a ball retriever, thanks for the thumbs up. Lyra, I hope your right. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hello Sir~ I really loved the beat to this.....very vibrant... Lauren~ Deep inside the stillness |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T., your bags are so full of "sagacity" that it doesn't matter if you have fewer seeds to sew! ~ May your winds not weaken but blow stronger ever more ~ EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Greeneyes Thank you so much. Earth Angel Thank you dear. |
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