Open Poetry #23 |
Aromatic Poetry |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Tonight.. it is soft of mandarin orange upon skin. Scented sweet, with hint of sandalwood, musky, full upon body cleansed under spray of water, hot, purifying, luxurious of feel in shower. With light bought, brought ghastly was mom's reaction this tiny reflecting , metal sculpture for candle illuminate. The perfect paint upon wall of shadow and light through bead of shade. Spray of powder to silk of smooth now to soothe, cool the hot, yet not, as surround with scent too many aromatic escape..in words of poetry. WhiteRose "The first rule of poetry, write what you know." |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
I liked this one, very vivid detailing of scents. Nicely penned. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sounds like my shower routine, but as usual, you write of my thoughts and experiences better than I could myself! Amazing! EA |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is wonderful, sweet friend, it is amazing how we can always conjire such perfumes and essences in poetry, yours always spells myriads of them, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I like to make my shower routine a sensory experience. Elegance in the mood and feel. Thank you all for commenting. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Anne, this is beautiful. Another one of the gems I missed when I was gone this past weekend. thanks for sharing Love To All, Ethel |
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