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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-10-23 07:02 PM

A Single Snowflake

a breeze blew in
from the north
a tender whisper to
the south came forth
sparked in a dusting
of unexpected snowfall
a silent morning walk
brought about this call
a flake came to rest
on the nape of my neck
I had to catch my breath
and keep my heart in check
for he had sent me
a single snowflake
to soothe the heat
of my ache

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (10-23-2002 07:07 PM).]

Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

1 posted 2002-10-23 08:27 PM

I believe a single snowflake makes a difference.I really like this discription. Thank you

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-10-23 11:32 PM

helen - I could almost feel the breeze that blew in the snowflakes. Tender is your poem...

BC

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2002-10-24 12:31 PM

*sighing* at your poetry as always, Lady.

"two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion"

excerpt from "I Love You"

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-10-24 12:55 PM

Helen, I really like this. It's really beautiful. I love snow, though we don't see much here in Florida. Thanks for sharing.

Love To All,
Ethel

The Crimson Knight
Member

since 2002-09-16

Posts 57
Reno, NV

5 posted 2002-10-24 07:07 PM

When I see them, they come in hundreds of thousands of them. Liked this

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-10-24 07:23 PM

(sigh) This is so gently touching and aching, sweet friend, and may he keep delivering you these snowflakes so you know you will always be loved deep down and remembered! (kiss on cheek) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

7 posted 2002-10-25 02:23 PM

wonderful, enjoyed immensly

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