Open Poetry #23 |
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My Love So Sweet |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
My Love So Sweet As I look out over the horizon as far as my eyes can see I see the moon peeking through the palm trees on the beaches of Waikiki. I hear the tranquil sound of waves breaking where shore and ocean meet. I watch the moon's reflection brightly shining as the gentle waves kiss my feet. All this beauty I love to share in the arms of my love so sweet. JamesLee Oct20 2002 [This message has been edited by JamesMichael (10-23-2002 05:22 AM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so sweet and beautiful. I love it Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ohhhh, this is so sweet and beautiful, James Michael. Thanks so much for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Very beautiful James! If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, and may you and your love forever share a lifetime of sweetness under the Waikiki moon, sweet friend, I love it, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Something very special about the music this poem brings to me. Thank you very much. etoodog |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
James, I thank you again for bringing the beauty of Hawaii into my home via your descriptive poems---and the net! Lovely to say the least! Linda |
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