More Than You Think I do (duet with Noah)

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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2002-10-12 06:35 PM

Love is a life
life is full of love
But we can't regret
About love
In my heart
A void
feeling down
For long time
Feeling sorry
For love we can't make it
Together
Writing letters to you
Expressing my feelings
for you
But down in my heart
There is a void
Iam lonely and blue
tonight
Without you besides me
feeling lost in a song
And feeling blue again
Can't find a clue
About love
How far we can make It
Through this love
But believe me
I love you
More than you think
I do
How you have been able to cope?
I can't do It alone
Iam just a ragdoll thrown around
Torn and bleeding deep down
Forgetten and buried in the snow
Without you I feel everything sold
What more do I have to prove?
When everything feeling blue
I can dream
I can love once agian
I can walk
I can talk
But What more do I have to prove toyou?
More than you think I do
But I do love you
Believe me
More than you think I do

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2002-10-12 06:55 PM

Well done you two!! Yay!! Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-10-12 06:57 PM

vandana - now this is excellent you two. You do write very well with Noah. More, more...

BC

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-10-12 07:01 PM

A most lovely duet...
Vandana, Noah, I am very proud of both of you!

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-10-12 08:47 PM

Very well done

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-10-12 08:55 PM

Vandana and Noah!
You two du-et very well together!
I hope to see more like this from the two of you.
Very very nicely done!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2002-10-12 09:25 PM

Bravo! A great duet...enjoyed.
ThisDiamond

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

7 posted 2002-10-12 10:08 PM

Such poignant words, nicely done. Hugs.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

8 posted 2002-10-12 10:28 PM

This is a wonderful duet.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2002-10-13 09:23 AM

vandana & Noah,

You doooo, doooo et, soooo wellll!

Linda

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2002-10-13 12:58 PM

nicely done Guy and Gal...you certainly must
do this again...

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

11 posted 2002-10-13 02:45 PM

Great duet!!! Very lovely piece and written with the full impact of the emotions of two.
***Ivy Rose

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

12 posted 2002-10-13 03:03 PM

*bravo* you two have create a wonderful duet.....great poem!!

Charisma

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

13 posted 2002-11-05 03:54 AM

awwwww! I'm glad i went back and got this one out of the back pages, this is beautiful!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2002-11-07 03:59 AM

Very very nice...James

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