Open Poetry #23 |
In My Heart |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
In My Heart Held are those moments, unseen as the whole of the bits, the temptation, when alone, feeling cold. Where my hurts are the judgements, inspirations' unfold. As your eyes let me go, into shadows I stroll. Heavy I am, holding tears that need flow. Turning time over, in hands wanting know of the path laid before me, in the wake of the moon, I am burdened with heartache that embraces too soon. Those in-between years have gathered the pain I wear as my cloak, never trusting again. If I'm loved in tomorrow, the depth you would see that part I have hidden, the inner of me. In my heart, I am holding, a shadowless soul, muting my efforts, leaving me with a hole. No more words to be voided, no thoughts, yours to view. We are strangers just passing beneath the moon, blue. And those thoughts always naked, my words, yours each day, As your eyes let me go, I now fade from your stay. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Little Mo darling heart, you know there is within your words such an ache, such a regret of shadows and you shade it so delicately and deepen the pain so skilfully. Wonderful writing darling heart, absolutely wonderful, you know I utterly utterly love this. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautiful writing, Maureen... and I too, can feel the pain in your words... ~ loving chipmunk hugs Lyra |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed this much |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Maureen, the ache of your slake is breathtakingly awesome. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I enjoyed my friend, and though filled with sadness in words..there is beauty in it and in you.... |
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