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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Hunter you don’t fight fair you know it is true twisting things as you go so wagons will circle for you selfishly you taste the meat and leave rotting men’s bones the game is over after you have heard their moans then you move on you just love the chase but blood stains your lips from every bite you taste I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Helen, this is sooooo explicitly poignant and filled with clarity, sweet friend, it saddens me to see relationships sometimes treated as survival of the fittest and ones heart is eaten out by another and only leaves both of every pair as victims! (sad sigh) You always have such powerful voices to share, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey Helen-- I do this imitation of Mick Jagger--from the stage at Altamont--the infamous concert that so symbolically "buried" the peace and love vibe of Woodstock. "Who's fighting and what for?" (--that doesn't really work in type, but I don't know how to type an accent.)  |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Good write Helen, really liked it. this one goes to the library hey serenity,,, me but the chase is over.. just had to know for sure. bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
bernie...please don't flatter yourself it is NOT to or about you...unless you are after men!!! and I am sorry to have to put this here but you are making my personal pain public and it seems I have no other recourse! what is it about leave me alone do you not understand? I even had to go to court to have you stop harassing me with a court order for no contact (which means the web too) I have asked you nicely to just leave me alone. Is there no depths you will not go to harm or hurt me? I ask you again….leave me alone…please just leave me alone. What do I have to do? do I have to stop writing and posting here? [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (10-22-2002 03:23 PM).] |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
I am not and for another thing.. I am fighting for everything in the world that means anything to me... YOU!!!!!! Just replying to your write, stop putting more than that into it... it's not putting your personal anything into it..... take the crit and accept it.......and if you want to put out dirty laundry out here... then so be it.... if u edit your message one more time so will i. just commenting... like u always told me it's not about u...IT'S ABOUT THE WRITER IN YOU!!!.. and i do like the things u write Bernie [This message has been edited by bslicker (10-22-2002 07:22 PM).] |
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