Open Poetry #23 |
The Beauty of Your Love |
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
The Beauty of Your Love By Larry Chadwick Hope you enjoy the collection of poems I found that I wrote in 1993! Here is one. Today I was pondering the beauty of your love, Searching for images of what you meant to me. And then I remembered as if from above, So clearly it was easy for me to see. It’s the first gift that ever you gave me, Given without effort and repeatedly over time. While it was there for everyone to see, The first time I saw it I knew your smile was mine. Even greater than the smile on your face, Came something deeper for someone so shy. So I wouldn’t forget I wanted that look to trace, The warmth, the joy, sincerity and character in you eye. It was the impression of your bearing, The warm feeling when near your space. That erased all thoughts worth fearing, Because of your charm and your grace. And from that first chance meeting, When hope in my heart boiled over with glee; The fear that this may be fleeting, Aroused that desire to pursue with all that was in me. Now though our bodies have been made one from above, And all the fruits of love we have shared; It’s more than those things which are done in love, It’s the beauty of knowing from the beginning you cared. December 10, 1992 (Yes I noticed! ) If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. [This message has been edited by Larry C (11-01-2002 12:50 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
those tings? Just kidding Larry. I love this. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love this love poem, Larry. Keep caring and sharing that memory. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Sad. This is really sad. You've stolen a lot of my lines and turned them into something sweet and romantic. How am I to go on without these wonderful lines? Eh? BTW - You wrote really well, too. Good job, Larry. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Larry... Obviously this was not meant for me but for another Nancy Lee. This is breathtaking..very special. ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Don't let LongJohn fool ya...his lines are like: Taking a glass of water, dipping his finger in it, touching it to some ladies blouse and saying:.."Let's go over to my house and get out of these wet clothes." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Larry, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it! Yes, I just love the vintage side of you too, I too am a fan of them classics, yay, we all love you so much, this is lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-01-2002 03:57 PM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How very beautiful. *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That kind of love can weather a lot of storms. No matter what rain might fall, a poem such as this would be treasured by a woman for a lifetime. ~ May the love you and your wife share, continue to grow and blossom ~ EA |
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reluctantlyme Junior Member
since 2002-10-28
Posts 34 |
You're very lucky to have found (and kept) a love like this. Enjoyed the read. No matter how good looking she is... someone, somewhere is glad she's gone. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so beautiful, Larry. |
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*Stubby* Member
since 2002-09-19
Posts 122 |
So very nice Some day may I also J *S* |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Donna, Thanks for catching that! Need a job proofing? And thanks for reading. Julie, How kind, thank you. Kacy, I can always count on you. Thanks. LJA, What's the problem? You don't know how to cut and paste? Here let me help!But thanks. Oh Nancy Lee, You made my day. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You were a fine poet then, Larry and a fine poet still! thank you for sharing this bit of your past with us ~ loving chipmunk hugs Lyra |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Toe, Have you been peepin' again? Noah, Well thank you for that! suthern, Thank you for your kindness. Linda, Indeed and thank you very much. rm, I feel lucky too! Your signature cracks me up! LOL Thanks. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, Well aren't you sweet? Thanks. J, Indeed you will! Thanks. Lyra, Well looked who slipped in. And thank you for that. It was a surprise I found them when up at my papa's funeral. About a dozen of 'em. All I really did before last year that is to be found. Hope you enjoy them all. Thanks again. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. [This message has been edited by Larry C (11-02-2002 01:08 AM).] |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
May the love of your life continue to make your heart soar...... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
scorpio, What a wonderful thing to say. Thank you very much. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Larry Thanks for sharing your beautiful words. I'm sure they have as much meaning now as they did when they were first written. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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