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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Cry By: Noah Eaton 10/12/02 Couples are dancing on the dance floor The love songs make me feel all overemotional Wishing I could take your hand and dance with you The soft blue lights and guitar croons make me feel sentimental There's so much breathing room around But I feel weak yearning to fondle you close And wondering how I'd feel hugging you And feeling your ears caress my shoulders in gold And I cry You're the one I fell in one with You're the one I want to love The one thing I want to hold onto My teddy bear of destiny I cry to feel your love... Spinning in circles on the balustrade Wishing in the future I can hold your hand I love Sometimes I hear the sounds of music boxes playing And I gently weep to hear that sound in your heartbeat, my love There are so many things that are worth leaving behind Your love is the only thing I ever need Tuck the sheets in and let me rest always in your eyes In this hall of mirrors your mirage is ever so transparent, reach for me... And I cry You're the one I fell in one with You're the one I want to love The one thing I want to hold onto My teddy bear of destiny I cry to feel your love... And I cry You're the one I fell in one with You're the one I want to love The one thing I want to hold onto And everything I need so badly I cry to feel your love... You're the zephyr of a siren, the lambrequin on a window Everything living, breathing, dancing, comisserating You're my Clotho who weaves my heartstrings every time I'm born again My Lachesis that plays my lute with measureless sweet memories You're like my chaplain that hangs all around me And you make my spirit glow like a ponys smile or a Care Bear You look so beautiful, you are seraphic It can hurt sometimes knowing there is nothing to you beauty can compare... And I cry You're the one I fell in one with You're the one I want to love The one thing I want to hold onto My teddy bear of destiny I cry to feel your love... And I cry You're the one I fell in one with You're the one I want to love The one thing I want to hold onto And everything I need so badly I cry to feel your love... Your love... "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-12-2002 05:04 PM).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
awwww Noah what a lovesong.....you are so gifted....may Love always brighten your path ((hugs)) Charisma |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful Noah Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is soft and lovely Noah. hugs, Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - a beauty of a love song I have to agree. Keep the faith my friend, you will be together... BC |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice indeed |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Noah...A beautiful and passionate love song...one that is sung from the depths of your soul. You always use such splendid words...words that trigger imagings. ***Ivy Rose |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
'...You're the one I fell in one with...' This is such great a line. I just love the whole poem, but this line really jumped out grabbed me. Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
That was really sweet Noah. You are a great person and I am glad to have met you. And thanks for taking the time to read all of my poems. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Noah...Such a sweet poem. You are such a romantic. I grew up when slow dancing was the only way...Paul |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Another beautiful write my friend. ThisDiamond |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
AAAWWWWW...Noah....this is so sweet, just as you are. This is a VERY beautiful love song. Thanks for sharing it. Love To All, Ethel...garysgirl |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely song, Noah! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Your "teddy bear of destiny" is a very kewl ponderance... You say it beautifully, Noah.. |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Oh, Noah...this is sooooooooo beautiful...~~sigh~~ (((((hugs)))))) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Noah, Can I claim you as my destiny? The one, set out for me seems to have a great many sharp edges. Great poem. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes I to hope you can take her hand and dance with her...soon...James |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Noah Your deep love and sorrow was so heartfelt and I could almost see the tears welling in your eyes. I wish for you nothing but lots of love and happiness. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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