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Shades of Green
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Shades of Green |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Shades of Green Today I walk in shades of green The inner eye of dreamer’s scene A field of flowers walled by tree A wile of yield I have decree. I’ve left the present for the past A mental trip that I have cast Into a world of phantoms fold A place that waits when growing old A place of ever-present youth Rooted in realities truth. That keeps us in a field of play A field of gone and yesterday. Here I dream of love and lace Of roses, wine and hearts embrace. Of energies beyond my cope It’s here that I in truth elope. It’s here I see the flying dove It’s here I still make ardent love. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Seymour, you always create gardens with your words and revive the Garden of Eden even within a glimpse, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
What an absolutely beautiful read for my morning Sey! This is stunning and so visual. Thank you for a morning smile. Hugs.  [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-22-2002 08:21 AM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is certainly pleasant. Thank you, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To-day you walk in eye of me so please enjoy the fantasy... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Noah for the read and reply. Gentle Spirit Thank you Pat, Thank you for the read. Sunshine,  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very fine and that 4th stanza's my favorite! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Good morning Sy, well this certainly is lovely this morning. I think I'd like to go for a walk with you ... Hugs, Marti |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS, Because you are a romantic. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy.. Lovely day for a walk in the woods.. May I join you? Enjoyed the morning read... ~Morning hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marti, It would be my pleasure. Enchantress Of course my dear. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, I hope I am not too late.....I would love to wander this beautiful place with you. Well done Seymour. hugs, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
So....we are off to Shangri-La again? Randy is still here with me ...drinking all me Raspberry tea... he says he knows the way...he has his saddle on You better leave now to meet us...we are as good as gone    (I told you he had waaay too much tea) *L*  *winkiewinkie*  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A wonderful mix of emotion and imagery Sy. Well done... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! My library is once again going to be graced with your words. I do not believe these thoughts could be expressed any better than you have just done. ~ May your memories keep you warm ~ EA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Positively lovely thoughts~ *Hugs*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! Much prettier than my shades of green... |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Seymour Tabin../\..poem really flies and sings; thanks,enjoyed much../\..Spiros ---------------moonbeams------- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you. Chris, Thank you for the well done. JM, Tell Randy to swing around and pick me up. WWS scorpio Thanks for the well done. Earth Angel Sweet reply, thank you. Marge Hugs back. passing shadows Thank you friend. Spiros Nice comment, thank you. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You are so young at heart, Sy... and this poem shows it... Its lovely  ~ loving hugs from MichiganLyra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling man this is as always truly exquisite writing and I love it utterly In dreams you wander lands afar Ride the dragon’s back to reach the star Touch the hope of dreamer’s mist Feather the wind with hero’s kiss Drape your soul with this thought That heaven such as this is bought So close your eyes and fly free On the wings of dreamer’s fantasy While you gather the stars soft light Sprinkle your soul with moonlight And in your heart you’ll always be On dragon’s back flying free Then let me share your starlit flight Within the realms of dreamers sight I love this one darling heart, it is as smooth as silk which slips over my mind like a cloak of wonder. Truly you are excellent and I love it utterly  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lyra, Thank you dear. Marsha, Your replies are always a delight. |
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