Open Poetry #23 |
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AWAKENING |
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camdlanor New Member
since 2002-10-22
Posts 2 |
AWAKENING I thought of you last night, I thought of you; You stole upon whisp of faint surprise And suddenly appeared before my eyes, Invading dream and perilous event You swept across in heavenly assent. Ere long my sunken pits of pebbled skree Lay dormant and abandoned o'er the bed, No rumbled soundings to awaken thee No cache of hidden treasure overhead. From dim and darkened caverns ever deep Come haunts of doubt, and hidden bowls of fear, Ganglia forms baring the soul from sleep To hide the undefined, the ever near. We chase the wilted terminals of time, Accept the moulding, cold inconstancy Of all that's gone before, supreme, sublime, To seed our plains of anonimity. I thought of you last night, I thought of you, Yet saw you, distant, faraway, remote, Your bouquets central nature, deep, arcane, Somewhere between the silence and the pain. Ron Kaye August 2002 |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A wonderful first post and the last line wraps it up so well. Well done and welcome to Passions! I hope you enjoy your time here at Passions. I am looking forward to reading more of your work. Welcome! If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A wondrous write, soft with longing, a stolen moment...Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) This is a powerful debut, sweet friend, I love it, such yearning fills your words as does a haunting of something you left behind that echoes back to you in spirit, this is excellent, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Ron, may you be inspired by al of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Welcome, and I too, look forward to reading more of your poetry. This was stunning! Thanks very much, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
camdlanor A very nice write, enjoyed. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome! A very soft cry in this. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! Beautiful first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions ![]() ![]() |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions!! Enjoy yourself here. Lovely first post. Chris ![]() Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I thought of you last night, I thought of you, Yet saw you, distant, faraway, remote, Your bouquets central nature, deep, arcane, Somewhere between the silence and the pain." this is so great, kind of reads like a song ![]() ![]() |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to our family. I enjoyed this and look forward to reading more from you! ![]() |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Wow!, Some very poignant words here. Welcome to Passions and look forward to reading more of your works. |
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FuzzyFrazzledFraggle Member
since 2002-09-20
Posts 155Fraggle Rock |
Yes Welcome to Pip as with the rest I too look forward to more of your words on these pages... Consider yourself fuzzed |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
A beautiful entrance into the Pip family. I am so glad I found this and look forward to reading more. Dawn |
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