Open Poetry #23 |
Ode to Keth |
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Ode to Keth Stroke your voice through my soul again Take me where there is no rain Bathe my heart in beauty’s sight Let me fly on the wings of night Breathe your poet’s words through me Speak the truth in lines I see No more will I care what comes of this All I need is there in poetic bliss I’ll ignore tomorrow’s pain and strife And stay within this ideal life So take the stress and strain I fear Let me stay by you right here Bathed in poetic beauty I will be By the power and magic of imagery Marsha Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marsha This was simply outstanding and your love radiated through each and every word. I hope all is well with you. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Stroke your voice through my soul again Marsha - this one line in itself is amazing. Love this poem!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Great Stuff! Oh yes. Funny: i was picturing a poem just today with the words magic imagery in it. Synchronicity, wouldn't you say? The bond between you and Keth is unmistakable, and heartrending, like two relatives should be. Betwixt the two of you, i believe you have cornered the market on romantic poetic notion. Wonderfully complimentary, Maaaaasha, to a pair of gifted writers. And, M, WELCOME BACK!!!!!!!!! Jeff |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Marsha, this is just gorgeous, sweet friend, I love magic and fantasy and your beautiful words shine with the essence of it! (kiss on cheek) May magic always fill your love, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
If I said this was good I'd be lying, it is splendiferous even if it is about me. Love you always Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The moment I read the first line, I started laughing... remembering when Kethry let me chat away, knowing I thought I was talking with you and not saying a word to disabuse me of my notion. LOL Which is to say... you both touch this soul... and it blossoms with your touch. *S* This is beautiful, Marsha... for a very special lady. *S* |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
mum this made me laugh and laugh I laughed so much I almost fell off the chair. This poem is really wonderful to say the least . You never fail to imprees me this is outstanding. Beautiful work, exquisite writing, Very well written love and warm stuff as always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Marsha... Now that I have met both of you in person, I understand why you always call Kethry your sister of your heart... I believe that you two are definitely soul sisters and perhaps you were real sisters in a previous lifetime... ~ Big hugs to both of you Lyra |
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