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Desk Space |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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It is the careful aesthetic placement of items of natural space and time that fill my rhyme. The very small treasures that make up my space. Upon desk that I am proud to say I got for a deal at dollar general are the trinkets, no, cherished bit's of life that I look upon each day. Teddy bears of every hue, the little girl just coming through, leaning here and there against this and that, pictures, candles, pens and scraps of trivial. Nothing important to any but me this sad and silly managerie of life in middle age of time. But still I must again proclaim, all apart of who I am. WhiteRose "my reflection becomes me" |
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Surreal Junior Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 35Paris |
I thought this was a wonderful piece. The first stanza was my especial favorite, and I found the use of enjambment to be very effective throughout it. It was an interesting choice of subject matter that you portrayed very well. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Is it while you are sitting, at this interesting and eclectic desk, that your brilliant poetry is created? Thanx for another peek into your world! EA |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love your desk, Anne... it makes a beautiful poem  ~ chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, I just love this, swee friend, I believes ones own surroundings also make up an inspiring poetic atmosphere and I too love teddy bears so much as it reminds me of love and innocence! (kiss onn cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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