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bslicker
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0 posted 2002-10-21 10:33 AM





Whispering Love


Sitting her
wondering if you
heard the whispers
in the wind
to bring our hearts
talking the same tune
of staying together
so that the wind
need not to carry
the whispers
of our Love.

Bernie




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Bernie Slicker

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1 posted 2002-10-21 12:08 PM


Bernie, we must have posted our two poems about our love being "whispered by the wind" about the same time. I just noticed this. But, I did enjoy it. I obviously think it's a good thought, huh? Thanks for sharing.


Love To All,
Ethel

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2 posted 2002-10-21 12:14 PM


bslicker
Enjoyed the read.

bslicker
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3 posted 2002-10-21 12:14 PM


Thanks for reading Ethel, and yes i noticed that also... And right after I posted and it returned my window back to the forum page, I saw yours........  I was then sitting here chuckling to myself about it......but I also do like yours, so for those reading mine, here's the link to yours.


/pip/Forum74/HTML/000564.html

Thank you Seymour for reading and for the reply.
Bernie


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Bernie Slicker


[This message has been edited by bslicker (10-21-2002 12:27 PM).]

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4 posted 2002-10-21 12:25 PM


Your words are as gentle and sweet as a morning breeze.

Earth Angel

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5 posted 2002-10-21 12:32 PM


Thank you Earth Angel

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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