Open Poetry #23 |
That Path Eventually Traveled (5,000) |
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
That Path Eventually Traveled By Larry Chadwick There is comfort in my knowing, That others have walked this way before. And cared enough to plan for me, A pathway well defined and more. Had I blazed this trail alone, I would rather I had died. But just to know they cared, Gave me strength down deep inside. And now this trail of grief I’ve found, Has taught me so much more. They’ve been my inspiration, To act like those who’ve gone before. Improve the way so dark ahead, Let them know where you have been. Help them also understand, That sorrow will likely come again. Lonely still the path before you, But traveled well you’ll know. Enhance the trail as you linger, That grace you’ve known will show. October 20, 2002 If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. [This message has been edited by Larry C (10-21-2002 02:57 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Wonderful and insightful write Larry and Congrads big guy on your 5000!! A wonderful acheivement. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Something tells me there is more to this path than meets the eye... well done, Larry, and congratulations on your milestone, one that has been quite weary lately, but still, you left behind notes that we, too, would have strength to find our way... |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
To each there is a season... Very nicely done, Larry - Congratulations on your 5,000th... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) CONGRATULATIONS ON 5000, sweet friend, and I know with your golden heart lighting the way before you you will find that path ever stretching on and leading you to the most tangible brightest light of all! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is magnificent, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Larry, it seems you have a way of leading us down the garden path and showing us treasures we otherwise would not have seen. Congratulations on the 5,000th, that's quite an achievement. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Larry C, Congratulations and a wonderful poem to boot. Enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful poem to mark this milestone Larry! Congratulations on your 5000th post! ~Smiles & Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Oh Larry, this is beautiful and wise and your 'grace' comes through it all. This is wonderful. Thank you so much for giving back to us, all you've learned, and, then some. Thank You, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello, sweet Larry. This is such a beautiful poem, with all your wonderful traits showing through the words. Your compassion is really special, Larry. To me the fact that you have had 5000 posts helps prove that you care about others feelings.....enough to encourage them with your compassion, love, and wisdom, like you do. Thanks for being you, dear friend, and for sharing your feelings of your heart. Love To All, Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Congratulations Larry! This is a milestone of which you should be proud!--Your 5000th post! Impressive! Not only do you have the soul of a poet, you ARE a poet! This poem is very moving and worthy of marking this auspicious occasion. ~ May you travel the PIP path for years to come ~ Linda |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Larry - congratulations on 5000 posts!!! This poem is wonderful and has a life's lesson in it's true words. hugs, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Congratulations on your 5000th post, Larry we cannot see beyond each bend the future is not ours to know be it happiness or woe this path traversed by all who live through love and loss, through take and give a lonely trail of love's despair where cries of mourning, fill the air but hope shines rays of light through tears soothing senses, calming fears filling future years with grace a road to love, this special place ~ angel hugs to you, Larry Lyra |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
There is comfort in my knowing, That others have walked this way before. And cared enough to plan for me, A pathway well defined and more. Had I blazed this trail alone, I would rather I had died. But just to know they cared, Gave me strength down deep inside. And now this trail of grief I've found, Has taught me so much more. They've been my inspiration, To act like those who've gone before. ======================================== You will already know what those verses mean to me and that they touch me in places deep....I know the distance that must be traveled before arriving upon this path...and while I wish you didnt have to learn this lesson of the heart...I also know the peace that comes from realizing we never walk alone when we follow the traces left behind. Youve penned a heart-light and a most appropriate poem to mark both a poetic and personal milestone. heart-hugs to you Larry...thank you for all that you've taught and shared with us here. Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Larry, congratulations on your 5000th post. We can never precisely know the path, but we can leave small treasures of ourselves along it as we travel...just as you have done. The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Donna, Thanks for being there. Karilea, You have given me so much strength. Thank you. Nan, Thank you always for being so kind. Noah, And God bless you too dear friend. Thank you so much. Keth, Aww...such kind words. Thank you for your friendship. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sy, Thanks for being a part of my life. And thank you for reading and responding. Nancy Lee, Thanks so much for all you've done for me. Pat, Such kind words. Thank you for your tenderness. Ethel, You seem to be describing yourself. Thank you for you kindnesses. Linda, Wow. Glad I was sitting down for that one. Thank you. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Chris, Thank you for your support. Peace. Lyra, ==================== but hope shines rays of light through tears soothing senses, calming fears filling future years with grace a road to love, this special place ==================== Without hope it is for naught. Thank you so much for such gentle understanding. Peace to you dear girl. JM, You are so sensitive and giving. Bless you for all you mean to me. Thank you so much. Michael, It seems that is so. Thank you sir and courage and peace to you. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful picture and writing...congratulations on 5000 Larry...James |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
James, Thank you so very much. Glad you enjoyed. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Larry... A very touching poem. I'm so glad you didn't have to travel this path alone...Paul Had I blazed this trail alone, I would rather I had died. But just to know they cared, Gave me strength down deep inside. Beautiful. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There is comfort in my knowing, that says it all dear Man~ even for those who walk the path alone... Each one of your poems is a milestone in my book~ and I look forward to 5000 more. |
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FuzzyFrazzledFraggle Member
since 2002-09-20
Posts 155Fraggle Rock |
full of hope and now I don't feel so alone..and congrats on 5000 Consider yourself fuzzed |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Paul, Me too! And thank you for such kind words. Lori, Better friends than you don't exist. Thank you dear lady. fuzzy, Very sweet of you. And thank you so much. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Darrn... now I need to say something nice about you cause I enjoyed the poem..( knowing I am holding back cause I enjoy all his poems...but am not about to tell him that) Good stuff Larry.... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Cpat, The man whose humor and wit can match the best, gone soft. I do indeed appreciate that side of you too. Thanks. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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