Open Poetry #23 |
Save A Place For Me In Heaven |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Josephine Wall * * * Save a place for me in heaven Where the sky is forever blue Where nothing bad can touch us And love lives on in me and you Spare me from this sorrow For I have endured so much pain It's time to stop this fighting For ultimately no one will gain Give me fields of green to run through Allow my spirit to be set free Far away from all this horror Is where I desperately want to be A place that's safe for our children Is all I wish for at this time Has life simply lost all meaning? For there seems no reason or rhyme Comfort me in my sadness Hold my hand through times of grief So many images will forever haunt me My mind is in total disbelief A world of love and compassion Filled with peace and harmony That's the place I've always dreamed of So won't you come there now with me? * * * We are all angels with only one wing...... we can fly only by embracing each other. I am in motion |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, this is sooooooo beautifully heartfelt, sweet friend, all your words are flowing with love in all its purity and the ending really touched my heart as together we all can become angels and fly to find that place above the clouds! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and the wonderful artwork you're sharing from Josephine is quickly becoming one of my favorite painters, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, this is so beautiful. Yes, isn't Heaven going to be a wonderful place....no more tears or sorrows....nothing bad or hurtful....no sickness or pain. thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, Well said and hugs to you. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sue a lovely and beautiful write. You have a gentleness about you that thouches the heart. Well done sweetie. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
'...We are all angels with only one wing...... we can fly only by embracing each other...' Sue, Let us embrace each other; it's the only way to save our world. This poem is definitely a keeper and so beautifully written. You have such a caring and emotional heart. I just love your description of Heaven; if only we could have this here on Earth. Hugs, Marti [This message has been edited by NewEnglandlazurlu (10-23-2002 09:38 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sue, breathtakingly beautiful poem and fabulous images. I hope you are hot homesick for heaven. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Such a heart-felt poem and something we all look forward to, being together in Heaven. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Tears decorate my hugs to you, Sue... This poem made me cry, but I loved it... especially those last 2 lines ~ angel hugs Lyra |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You reminded me of why I desire heaven so much...James |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sue~ A wonderful poem and outlook for what the future holds...Paul |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Sue - you write well of the metaphor of heaven - lots of things to cause us to stop and ponder these days - guess the heaven metaphor was invented for those times when just too much is going on that we can't handle - loved your poem - Paul |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Oh Sue! Let's join hands and soar off to Heaven right now! "A place that's safe for our children Is all I wish for at this time" I wish for this with all my heart! May we one day find Heaven on earth, and if not, well I'll meet you at the Pearly Gates!! Tammy |
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