Open Poetry #23 |
The Knocker |
ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
The Knocker Ah, the night, dark and safe you think you are safe in the dark, like a burned out star when the knocking begins like many nights before a rap, a thud, a knock on the door You open the door and no-one's there perhaps he or It is just trying to scare... ...you, my friend, out of your mind so you hide in the shadows and hope he won't find... ...you, with sweat oozing from all pores and when you relax there's a knock on the door a rap, a thud, your name's in blood written without pen as your panic floods You fly up stairs to bolt your bedroom door it must be imagination, and nothing more once again, while you sleep, safe in the dark there's a rap on the bed post there's a newly left blood mark on the wall, above your head your mouth opens to scream you pray to your god that its only a dream but its reality, my friend, and he's finally found you to give a final package with postage due the shadows move slowly youre blind in pitch dark The Knocker knocks no more when the pain finds your brain his bite is worse than his knock! Sweet Dreams and Happy Halloween! [This message has been edited by ShadowRider (10-20-2002 10:10 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ShadowRider Good paint, bad dream. Enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
AH gee Jeff!! I'm never going to bed again!! Going to sit up all night now! This is an excellent albeit scary write my friend. ~Haunting Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(crawls under the bed and shivers) Oh Jeff, this had me at the edge of my seat, it was horrible Jeff, how it stared at me with his cold dead eyes! LOL! This is wonderfully eerie, sweet friend, I love it, Happy Early-Halloween, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jeff, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..ShadowRider../\..well-written; i enjoyed.. ../\..Spiros --------------------St. Urbain St.------- |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Toe, Spiros, Sey, Nance: it was awfully nice for you to be allowed to be scared by this. It was alot of fun to write and was inspired by a couple of Horror movies (that's 'H-O-R-R-O-R' friends, not....uh...) Jeff [This message has been edited by ShadowRider (10-20-2002 10:07 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Jeff I loved this but now I'm to scared to go to bed. I think this is the perfect time to read some poetry......Very well done Jeff! If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Jeff, you certainly scared me......and I'm here alone except for my little dog. I think I'll turn the t.v. up louder so MAYBE I won't hear MR. KNOCK !?! Thanks for sharing (I think????)HeeHee!! Love To All, Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Jeff, I had just made myself some popcorn and settled myself down to read some PIP poetry, and I swear, as I was reading your Halloween poem, I was eating faster, and faster....and now its all gone. Oh, no, there is still some left. I'll save it for you as a small treat for writing such a neat spooky poem! ~ Keep your eyes open wide! The boogey man lurks in the shadows and could get you when you least expect it! ~ Linda |
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