Open Poetry #23 |
I Don't Like You Right Now |
regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I love you, But, I don't like you right now. Your stubbornness leaves me feeling outside of you. I watch you hurt yourself instead of facing the issue. That frightens me, and, then I feel hurt and stubborn, too! But, I love you. Guess that's why I'll say no more, just give you time ...to grow... ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Pat...I wonder if we asked for a count of hands, how many would be raised if the question were to be "have you gone through this, too?"... too many to count, I am sure. Nice write! |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
The hardest part of love, allowing one to find their own way. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sun, this is true, and on occasion, though rare, I'll post a poem with a motive different than most. Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (10-20-2002 05:13 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Pat, just standing by and being quiet is sometimes the hardest kind of love to give. I guess we can only let then know we're here if they want us. Right? Thanks for sharing this poem this morning. Love To All, Ethel |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Pat, I know just how you feel. I believe there are alot of us who have gone through this. Thank you for sharing. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Patricia, I can understand this feeling, sweet friend, love always has its glitches and love is not meant to change someone but if one can better him or herself that only makes tolerance stronger than ever! (big hugggsssss) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Pat so many times I have stood in these very shoes. Wonderful writing! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sometimes we just have to step back abit..for awhile. Well done. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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caterina Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 188Canada |
Oh yeah, I can relate to this one. Very well done. caterina |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A very real, and right, write! You really tell it like it is in your poems! I love that! By the responses you get, many people identify with what you convey in your poetry. ~ smiles from across the miles ~ Linda |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
To everyone responding, thanks for taking the time and letting me know this too, has meaning to you. Actually, it was written when my son was a teen-ager and I wanted to throttle him but, good! It has worked for me (this poem) many times since, with various other people in my life. Linda, You truly, really, really, are an angel, aren't you! (big smile) I hope you know how very much I appreciate your love and kindnesses. Hugs and much loving energy back to you, and all who posted. Thank you all, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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FuzzyFrazzledFraggle Member
since 2002-09-20
Posts 155Fraggle Rock |
*smiles and nods* my step mum has said those words to me..I know I'm still young but It's funny I know she has a point and reason for saying the things she does.. Consider yourself fuzzed |
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