Open Poetry #23 |
Dreams of wild horses |
Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
She dreams of wild horses Running freely in the sky Troubles left behind them They keep running till' they die their manes pick up the wind And their feet pick up the dust Their eyes just keep on shineing And their bones will never rust And the child, she runs beside them Her face wide with a smile Untill she gets her independence Which won't be for a while Wind [This message has been edited by Wind (10-19-2002 11:42 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I need to take this poem and memorize it---so that it can replace that nightmare of horses that keep haunting me-- /pip/Forum46/HTML/002792.html I thank you so much for this...I was due for a replacement...smile? |
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elfin_tigress Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 101Someplace |
It's been a while since I've been here, but this was a nice read to get me back into the swing of piptalk. Welcome to Passions! |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
serenity Blaze I read your poem. I'm sorry that horses scare you like that. I'm not much of a horse person myself, to be honest |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your dream horses are far more appealing than night mares! I love the lightness and freedom I experienced while reading this poem. Lovely EA |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love horses, so this poem title caught my eye. I enjoyed the read. Welcome to this poetry forum! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Yay!!! I love horses too, sweet friend,this deeply touched my heart as it flows with such grace! (big hugggssssss) This flows gently with heart, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
like this, Wind! It has such energy and effervescence! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
This is a dream of a poem!!! I love the imagery of the horses...reminds me of the Native American dreamings. ***Ivy Rose |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely - enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Thank you for the wonderfull messages. I worked really hard o this poem and am really proud of it |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Awww, It's amaizing, just a little while ago I was a junior member.... Never be normal! |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
I love horses.. This was amazing.. i am so adding this to my library and suggesting my best friend who also posts on pip to read this. |
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