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Never Wanted
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Never Wanted |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Never wanted to tell you this Why Iam fallling In love With you? When I looked Into your eyes, There Is something that your eyes tells me Never wanted to hurt you again I want to love you all over again Never wanted to tell you how much I care about you? Never wanted to be lonely again Because the way love me you love me Through out this heart There has always been something In your eyes It tells me I can come to know how long I know your love for me that well How much you love me? Never wanted you To get hurt again Never wanted..... [This message has been edited by vandana (10-13-2002 11:17 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Inner questions to be explored... our never wants unfolding... Enjoyed this, Vandana... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) This is powerfully heartaching, sweet friend, I know how you feel here and hope now you have found true love without having to feel insecure or hurt! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
heartfelt penned, words so straight from your heart..... ((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
I liked the topic and the way you presented it. There are some gramatical errors that should be dealt with like the plural usage of "eyes". Also there is a line where "is" is used when "has" should be. I liked the word choice used. alice "See, no one loves..." - Prayers for Rain |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
vandana~ A very touching and heartfelt write, my friend. Nicely done.  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
All these love poems...I did forget, it is all knowable from the eyes, alone.... thanks for reminding of the ups and downs of being in love... the fears and the joy...of being loved. I agree about a few of the technical problems with this poem as mentioned above... Thank you for this poem, Warmly, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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