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Pain in the Mouth
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Pain in the Mouth |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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That dentist was mean Even though my teeth Are now clean It felt like I was gonna leave The dentist toothless Because of how hard He was yanking At the middle of my teeth My mouth will never Be the same again He caused me so much pain I had to take 3 ibuprofen To kill the pain He aggrivaited my gums Now they look red as a beet When he was cleaning I never saw so much blood In my life Now you see Why I hate the dentist Unfortunately I have to go back Because of cavities Yuck Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
I want his head. Liam Dark Digivolve to...  Shadow Liam!What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Julie, I'm sorry to hear you had a bad-checkup, though I can't really relate to what you went through, my heart goes out to you and hope the fillings and pain-alleviation goes OK real soon, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
the_loner_23 - this is the first poem I've ever read about a dentist. I'm very glad you wrote one. I feel the same way, yukkkkk... BC |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
im so sorry for your mouth pain! dentists are horrible people LOL...seriously though i hope you feel better real soon! take care. amy  "love is like a butterfly-- |
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A. L. Becker Member
since 2002-09-06
Posts 167San Francisco, California |
I really, really liked this one. "Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?' |
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