Open Poetry #23 |
Dixie’s Dreaming |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Dixie’s Dreaming brown canoed I lay with you telling lazy fishing lies dip my toes in the Mississippi looking in your eyes the warmest welcome you could ever give is caressed in shirts white cotton easy making memories from simple things never to be forgotten tying chicken legs in a stringed basket for blue crabs to troll Dixie’s dreaming and this is truly where I wear my soul Mississippi…I will always love you…best. I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I enjoyed these thoughts..I love the blue crabs, very popular in these parts..but have never gone fishing... *s M |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - southern skies, summer nights are speaking tonight... BC |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Helen, You wrote this especially well, for I sit here and relax and sigh. Sounds like a wonderful place to be and the simplest things somehow always seem to stay in our minds, making memories. Still swaying, just a tad, in that canoe, breathing in life. Mmmmmmmm. Nice to get away for a minute. Warm Regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
"Brown canoed...." Excellent. Very nicely done. Bob |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
I have no living experience in the South except a neighbor who's mother was from Georgia. The word I relate to is soft in order to describe her spoken words and mannerisms. I like your title to describe the South. etoodog |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
"brown canoed I lay with you telling lazy fishing lies" quiet Mississippi romance . . . and fishing too how nice! tell you what . . . you bring the chicken legs and the basket, i'll bring the canoe . . . |
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