Open Poetry #23 |
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Good Night |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Girl: Look at all you've give me tonight. You took me to dinner You took me for a lovely walk You wrote me a wonderful poem And made me a bed of roses. I haven't given you anything have I? Toe: I wouldn't say that. You gave me someone to eat with It was a nice night for a walk I write alot of poems anyway And it was a chance to do something else with flowers. Girl: I guess we're about even. Toe: I guess so. Good night. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You ol' softie..... |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This leaves me with that same delightful feeling of all being right with the world that my favorite old movies do... it's wonderful! *S* And it should definitely answer any questions Earth Angel might have still as to whether you're a true southern gentleman! *S* I like this very much, sweets... |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
guess you are... nice to point out that expectations in some situations are what we make them and how we look at things... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
And that is what a perfect date it is all about, dear southern gentleman! ---Mutually giving and satisfying--with no unwanted demands or high expectations--just enjoying each other and going with the flow. Your charm is in full form Linda |
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majnu![]()
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
very nice statement of what is amazingly not obvious to too many people. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahhhh Toe...you are a softie... you amazing gentle man. ~Gentle hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Mr. Toe, this is SOOOOO good. See, I told you that you're a "SOUTHERN GENTLEMAN", with grits and all. Thanks for these sweet poems with which you're showing us another side of you. I still like the side of you, too, that writes all those funny poems. Will be looking for both kinds. Love To All, Ethel |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This was awesome Cold hands means a warm heart |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
You are "too cool"! So is the poem, Warmly, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
You have restored my faith in MANkind. You are a true gentleman! Marti |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
My favorite lines: Toe: I wouldn't say that. You gave me someone to eat with Toe - Are you eating grass, AGAIN!??? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, So you took your toe out of your mouth. LOL Good one. |
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