Open Poetry #23 |
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If Only Tomorrow |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown ![]() |
~ By Sue ~ I try so hard just to hang on Even when things get way too rough Sometimes my thoughts start to wonder Thinking life is just too tough People talk about love Like it is something real I know what is in my heart And I know what I feel The emotions I feel inside Are so very confusing Sometimes I feel love Sometimes I feel nothing I am so tired from worry It is a struggle to get going I would rather stay in bed Than to waste time trying It seems there is always something That gets in my way If only tomorrow Could be a better day 10-17-02 |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, I really like the thoughts you put in this poem. Very good. Love to All, Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you gotta keep on trying, tomorrow can be a better day but life is what you make it...remember that, it's true. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, my heart goes out to you, I know this feeling and these last few days I've felt the love has gone yet I reflect on the words she said before and believe there is still faith and I just go on remianing optimistic while fighting the tears! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, my thoughts go out to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, Enough tomorrows and it will happen. You gotta have hope! Courage girl I know it is hard. And peace. ![]() If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Reality bites, huh? I enjoyed the read, but not the knowledge that it was written with the pen of sadness. ![]() |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh Sue, how often during the day I think of you and pray for you. Hang in there and take it one day at a time. Maybe even 1/2 a day at a time. We're all pulling for you. Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick A good write with a sad thought. ![]() |
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