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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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It is always tragic circumstance this constant diatribal dance, that escapes into the phone whenever you are calling home. No pleasantries or anecdote instead depression you denote I grow tired of the dark converse and daily it is getting worse. I wish for time across the wire spent with you in lax retire. Thoughts about our love perhaps, could we talk on this perchance? Call with dreams in your heart share visions, all the sights impart, but please no more harass of mind a distant touch that's most unkind. I want the treasure of your words softly, gently, to be heard. WhiteRose 10/17/02 |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
I don't think you ask too much, hope the right person reads it. Enjoyed |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Enjoyed this read Anne Cold hands means a warm heart |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Richard, I don't think it's too much to ask either. Thanks for reading and responding.  Thank you Julie, for always reading and commenting. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Anne, I know just how you feel, I too am in a long-distance relationship with my sweet Joanna and I always long to hear her words of love as I always share them to her from my heart! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, I wish you great hope and love to come your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
seems that change should be made, some way, somehow, on one's part...or on both. You cannot go on tired like this. I feel the wear on your heart here Anne. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Noah, thank you for reading and responding. It's tough to carry on a relationship when two people are together, let alone miles and miles apart. Dixie, my dearest friend, I do grow weary. But am a creature of habit now. I'm not sure I have the heart for change anymore. Thanks for reading and for always being so kind in your response. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, dear Anne, I understand completely the difficulty that you and your love are having being miles apart. Just like me and my Gary. But, after reading so much of these subjects of love in different circumstaces, I've FINALLY decided to chase away those doubts and fears that keep coming back to me. I'm going to do my best to give him the trust that he so willingly has given me all these years. Good luck with your relationship. Love To All, Ethel....garysgirl |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
WhiteRose, Good subject. It takes work to stay on a positive level. Good poem, hope it gets the message across to the one it was written for! SG |
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