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Open Poetry #23

Weep for Me

DarkShroud
Junior Member

since 2002-09-25

Posts 15

0 posted 2002-10-17 07:47 PM

Stand beneath me,
I will shade you from the sun.
Stand beneath me,
I will protect you from the rain.
Stand beneath me too long,
I will weep for you.

DS
10-16-02

May you laugh, but not too much;
May you live with relish,
And may you love with all you have!

[This message has been edited by DarkShroud (10-17-2002 07:59 PM).]

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2002-10-17 08:59 PM

Very nicely done. Enjoyed

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2002-10-17 09:40 PM

I liked this a lot. Very sweet, true love.

Warm Regards,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

DarkShroud
Junior Member

since 2002-09-25

Posts 15

3 posted 2002-10-17 10:02 PM

WhiteRose------I'm glad you enjoyed this.

Pat----Thank you.

DS

May you laugh, but not too much;
May you live with relish,
And may you love with all you have!

Enotneicna
Member

since 1999-06-06

Posts 340
Oakland, Or, USA

4 posted 2002-10-17 10:11 PM

Avi......this is soo pretty!!!
friends always
Sharon

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!

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