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Open Poetry #23

Her - Part3

WorrosLanrete
Junior Member

since 2002-11-14

Posts 45

0 posted 2002-12-15 05:19 PM

He tried to block it out
So much reminded him
Was told by others that there were other things
But how can other things bring happiness
How can they when she was everything
And everything reminded him of her
And everything reminded him of pain
He opened up his wallet and her picture came to site
Behind his eyes pulsed her eyes
On his chest he missed her touch
Within his heart beat his love
He hurt inside
Pain
So much pain
He fell to his knees
His stomach churned and his sickness escaped his mouth
He fell to his hands
His head grew thick with pain
He fell to the ground
His mind was failing and swirling round
He laid then there on unconcious floor
He couldnt fight it
Couldnt fight it anymore...

-JB

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2002-12-15 07:35 PM

Oh my...I can feel the pain of this man. This is a writing that touches all of us who at some time or another have lost the love of our life. Will there be another chapter?
I enjoyed the read very much! ~~S~~

Pen how you truly feel...
it is a safety-valve for the soul!

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