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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2002-12-15 11:08 AM


More and More
these words are
meaning(less)
Misleading,
misused and
misinterpreted
Or defiled and
corrupted by
those who use
them to sanctify
their lies(lives)
Forgive me if
I cannot yet
speak these
words
But you will
know without
a doubt that
I do,
for my embrace
speak volumes
that words
cannot

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-15-2002 11:09 AM).]

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arthur
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 678
england
1 posted 2002-12-15 11:13 AM


I liked this
as much for the sound signature as the words
arthur

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2002-12-15 11:24 AM


sometimes you have to read between the words,
and sometimes words are so confining, but
sometimes, they are all we have access to , like over this damned internet, where words
are the only tools we have.........

as for real life, i rather spend a silent day with someone who just knows me,
than to chat mindlessly away about nothing......

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2002-12-15 11:24 AM


As you have effectively illustrated with this, yet another fine write from your prolific pen, "Actions speak louder than words!"

A warm and loving embrace speaks volulmes!

~ Sending you a warm angel hug

EA


garysgirl
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4 posted 2002-12-15 11:25 AM


It is along the same lines as my poem, isn't it?
You know, actions do speak louder than words, I've always thought. Someone can tell you that they love you all day, but if they don't show you, you start wondering if they're speaking the truth.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts and feelings, friend.    

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

5 posted 2002-12-15 11:28 AM


Absolutely!  Sometimes the words are empty if there is no action to back them up.  Very well done!!
Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
6 posted 2002-12-15 11:45 AM


Thank you very much arthur I appreciate the reply and thank you for your words

Inked while seperating internet from real life, is a good thing to do in most instances, I have met some great people through the net and have carried on long friendships with them. Sometimes these relationships are better, the distance creates an openess in a short time that can take years in a "real" friendship. That said my email is always open to anyone who wishes to vent or wants to talk.

Thanks EA appreciate a warm hug on a cold day

Yes Ethel that's why i smiled through your lovely poem. You say it in such sweet words of grace while I barrel headfirst to get my point through lol

Thank you very much Gentle Spirit I'm glad you enjoyed it


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
7 posted 2002-12-16 02:44 AM


an age old lesson here, you've done it well!
Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space
8 posted 2002-12-16 09:11 PM


Very kind words passing  
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