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As the Earth Turns |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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As the Earth Turns I wait my notions of create Much like the motion of the earth To leap the plains delineate And pass the pain that is its birth. In the moisture of mornings dew The offering of life to drink I wait for crystal drops to view To dip my pen and write its ink And never has it failed me yet Nor ever has it laid a bill. And I am fully in its debt Nor do I think it ever will This nectar of my flowers word Sends colors to the seeing Eye It gathers in the field a herd And often feeds upon a sigh. As flowers lift their head to sun So I will write till I am done. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, Please, Sy, write it all and invite us to your merry ball of crystal chandaliers in light that wane in dawn and leave the night then take us through your every day and leave us in your surf of say then towards the eve bring us again the magic of your ever-pen... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine It would be my pleasure.   |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Your force of will with ink and quill bids us all to write To share our woes and smite our foes with words that share our plight So thanks to you and all you do to give this face a grin As on I moil in woeful toil setting rhymes that do me in. Thanks for a fine story. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Some speak the rule that a poet tis but a wordy fool ... their small minds lacking the cool to know thy pen is a tool. They understand not the terse of conversing in verse ... that we seek meter's coerce and rhyme is a invited curse. They know not the bliss of a closing couplets cadenced kiss ... and I'd be remiss if I didnt say ohhowIlovewhenyouwritelikethis!  *winkiwinkie*  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ken, Thank you for the fine comment. JM, And ohhowIlovewhenyouwritelikethis! WWRS  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
"This nectar of my flowers word Sends colors to the seeing Eye It gathers in the field a herd And often feeds upon a sigh" Thank you, Mr. Seymour, for "the nectar of your flowers word". "Love makes the world go around" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
The wonderful muse of nature. another keeper |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
its a good one nice candence to it but how fortunate you are i struggle and swear and rant and just now and again something i can return to next day and like gets born arthur |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl Thank you dear for the wonderful comment. Aenimal Thank you my friend. arthur I think we are all in the same boat. Thank you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good afternoon, Mr. T.! Another brilliant write I see! "As flowers lift their head to sun" I pray you'll write 'til thine days are done, I'll read your words I'll ahhh and ooo I'll learn of life Because of you! ~ super duper angel hugs EA |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
"As flowers lift their head to sun So I will write till I am done." I hope you are never done.  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Seymour, this is lovely, sweet friend, yes, as the earth turns always write the beautiful things you see as every blink of an eye a small detail changes! (big hugggsssssss) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Thanks for the super duper hugs. amusemi, Thank you kind friend. Noah, And thank you my friend. |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
I desired to read this poem because of the title. It somehow reminds me of a poetic soap opera if there is such a thing. Anyway, you write much better than I think. Thank you. etoodog |
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