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Tending Wounds
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Tending Wounds |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
You would have this one beg for mercy when you know the arrow long since poisened your heart and in time some time it will begin to wither again with burn of searing lonely. Be still!!! I would pull not or break but push it through that you might enjoy the anguish of knowing both the entry and exit from one side to the other Lie still or squirm in hand firm I will minister only an oath, not a wounded cry |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Damn, Ron! This is one that I certainly wish I had written. I feel the shaft Ed |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I think I just got out hustled again... smiling. love this Cap-- mind if I keep this'n? (already kept the other one too.)  Excellent. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Awesome power in these words Cpat. excellent write |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very strong emotion here |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
WOW! One wonders what the motivation for this work might be. Powerful. Sunkissed. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've read this three times... you can only imagine the images I received... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat, My My, big sigh, excellent write. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ron, WOW!.......or, should that be OW! enjoyed.....warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this hurts, deeply penetrating, dont understand it all.........but it hurts reading..... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Powerful writing captain Ron. To say it's good isn't even good enough....just know that I enjoyed. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Capt. Ron, your words are so excellent, that I don't even know what words to reply with. But, this happens quite often to me when I read your poetry. All I know is that your talent sure does show............  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron Ouch! An emotional poem, yet stoic in its hold on the bitter bite. Sending you a hug. |
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